Friday, 11 March 2016

Narrative Secret Place

In the past before the 1900’s there were three kids and a mother. The mother was named Katy and her children were called James, Alicia and Gordon. Her children had been drugged and kidnapped. The parents called the cops and the cops said “They were nowhere to be found”. The mother said “Can’t you do anything about it?”. The cops said “No unless you have evidence that you didn’t do it”.

The next morning the mother went searching for them. As she was running through the field of Eden park she fell into a dark mysterious hole. When she fell in the hole torches started to lit up against the wall. As she was walking traps came out of nowhere, arrows shooting out of the wall and rooms getting smaller. While she was walking she would hear weird noises whispering her children’s names Alicia, James and Gordon over and over again. As she leaned against the wall one of the bricks came out and that’s where it led her to children in a secret passage. She found her children but they were across from her. Whenever she stepped on the wrong tile her children get attacked. As she walked carefully to her children all of a sudden an arrow shot out of the wall and it had killed Gordon. When she saw Gordon killed she cried her lungs out and she was very heartbroken. Katy only had one plan on her mind for her children to survive.

If she wanted her children to survive she had to put a gun next to her head. So as she put the gun next to her head she said “Goodbye”. When she pulled the trigger a loud bang bounced off the walls. She died with her son. Everyday Alicia and James would meet by their mum’s and brother's graves and would say “Goodbye”!!!

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