Easter Holidays
In The Easter Holidays My Brother, Cousin, Friend and I Went To The YMCA BasketBall Courts. We Went To The Courts Because It Was Boring And We Wanted To Be Active. When We Got There It Was Not Packed. As We Walked Inside It Felt Like A Steaming Pot And Had A Bad Odor. We Stayed There For 1 Hour. In That 1 hour We Played Master And BasketBall. My Friend Has Been Around The World 3 Times, My Brother Been Around The World 4 Times, My Cousin Been Around The World 2 Times And I Been Around The World 1 Time Because They Were Way Out Of My League. As We Finished We Walked Across The Road To The Panmure Bridge Swimming Pools. When I Walked Across I Saw Ofa Waving At Me So I Ran Inside And Got Changed. When I Got Outside It Was Freezing So I Jumped Into The Freezing Water And Swam To Ofa So I Could Get Warm. After 2 Hours Of Playing In The Water With Ofa We Went To Change And Head Back Home. It Was Fun Playing At The Pools With Ofa.
I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1. My teachers are Miss Paton and Mr Wong.
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Friday, 11 March 2016
Narrative Secret Place
In the past before the 1900’s there were three kids and a mother. The mother was named Katy and her children were called James, Alicia and Gordon. Her children had been drugged and kidnapped. The parents called the cops and the cops said “They were nowhere to be found”. The mother said “Can’t you do anything about it?”. The cops said “No unless you have evidence that you didn’t do it”.
The next morning the mother went searching for them. As she was running through the field of Eden park she fell into a dark mysterious hole. When she fell in the hole torches started to lit up against the wall. As she was walking traps came out of nowhere, arrows shooting out of the wall and rooms getting smaller. While she was walking she would hear weird noises whispering her children’s names Alicia, James and Gordon over and over again. As she leaned against the wall one of the bricks came out and that’s where it led her to children in a secret passage. She found her children but they were across from her. Whenever she stepped on the wrong tile her children get attacked. As she walked carefully to her children all of a sudden an arrow shot out of the wall and it had killed Gordon. When she saw Gordon killed she cried her lungs out and she was very heartbroken. Katy only had one plan on her mind for her children to survive.
If she wanted her children to survive she had to put a gun next to her head. So as she put the gun next to her head she said “Goodbye”. When she pulled the trigger a loud bang bounced off the walls. She died with her son. Everyday Alicia and James would meet by their mum’s and brother's graves and would say “Goodbye”!!!
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Friday, 12 February 2016
St Heliers Beach
In the holidays I went to St Heliers Beach with my family. When I got there I saw shells, I felt the scorching sand and the freezing water splash on my body. When I went in the water it was so cold my whole body felt numb. The waves were so big I nearly drowned but luckily the wave pushed me back. My mum shouted “IT’S EAT TIME”, so me and my cousin ran to the tree . The food that I ate was chicken, potato salad, crab salad, sausage and chips. It was so delicious I couldn’t stop eating because the flavour did not go away. We went back and started doing bombs in the water. A few minutes later it got boring so we went to change. After we got changed we just went for a little walk. After the walk we went back home and I ate the leftovers in the car.
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Hi my name is Sam. I go to Panmure Bridge School, in Auckland New Zealand. I'm a year 6 student. I was born in Auckland. I like to play soccer, rugby, touch and American football. My favourite foods are K.F.C and mangoes. In the future I want to be a great rugby league player.
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Thursday, 5 March 2015
Sentences to describe summer
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I have learnt new words to describe summer and these words can help me in my writing.
1.The blistering sun made me get sun burnt.
2.The boiling heat made me feel like a hot pot.
3.I was sizzling like a BBQ with summer heat.
4.The blazing sun made me unconscious.
5.The sweltering heat turned me into a roasted marshmallow.
I have learnt new words to describe summer and these words can help me in my writing.
1.The blistering sun made me get sun burnt.
2.The boiling heat made me feel like a hot pot.
3.I was sizzling like a BBQ with summer heat.
4.The blazing sun made me unconscious.
5.The sweltering heat turned me into a roasted marshmallow.
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Friday, 13 February 2015
My bio poem
Samisoni
Who is confident,talented,friendly and vain.
Son of Salote and Vea Tuimana.
Lover of K.F.C,Wendys,BK and Mcdonald's.
Who feels heart-broken,excited and elated.
Who is afraid of the devil,guns and gangsters.
who would like to bungee jump off the Sky Tower,Cannon ball off the Harbour Bridge and go to Fairy Falls.
Who needs love,family and GOD
Resident of Panmure
Tuimana
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